I've written a few press releases at work and these changes don't surprise me. The original release was too long and personal.
I think the DP's version is fine and nice.
aira
Bicycle Board Members,An article entitled, "Morgantown ads sidewalk bike parking" appeared in today's Dominion Post that is so different from the press release that I sent them that I'm compelled to send you that which I sent them. Please see attached.Frank GmeindlCyclists fare best when they act and are treated as drivers of vehicles
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