Agree with Greg and Jim, "fearlessly" is redundant.
I've always liked the one-liners.
I think "All" is superfluous. The entire second sentence repeats much of the first, merely to detail "any reason". The third sentence dwells on glory-seeking (recognition), a new and unnecessary concept.
Also, I like "Morgantowners choose" rather than "can enjoy."
In essence, my vision is "Morgantown residents choose to ride bicycles anywhere, anytime, for any reason."
But hey.
John
At 10:26 AM 1/9/2007 Tuesday, Jim Rye wrote:
I think "and fearlessly" can be cut because it is implicitly redundant with "safely". Otherwise, I like it as is.
Frank Gmeindl fgmeindl@verizon.net 1/8/2007 8:21 PM >>>
Bike Board Members,
Please give me your feedback on the following suggested Bicycle Board vision statement:
All Morgantown residents can enjoy bicycling safely and fearlessly anywhere, anytime for any reason. Morgantown residents choose to ride bicycles for transportation as well as recreation. Our state and our nation recognize Morgantown for the benefits of bicyclingto our health, our environment, our economy and our quality of life.
Frank
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