Re: [Bikeboard] Bike Parking press release

I've written a few press releases at work and these changes don't surprise me. The original release was too long and personal.

I think the DP's version is fine and nice.

aira

On Wed, Sep 1, 2010 at 8:30 AM, Frank Gmeindl frank.gmeindl@comcast.netwrote:

Bicycle Board Members,

An article entitled, "Morgantown ads sidewalk bike parking" appeared in today's *Dominion Post *that is so different from the press release that I sent them that I'm compelled to send you that which I sent them. Please see attached.

Frank Gmeindl *Cyclists fare best when they act and are treated as drivers of vehicles*

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